LLoovvee

I love you
You don't know
I wish i could tell you
But no
I wish i could be with you
But can't
We could be together forever
But forever doesn't have a chance
p.s.
your my dream boyfriend or my friends cousin.

Reviews

[rielovella]

Nice poem. Keep up the good work!

[Rachel U.]

A- You shouldn't repeat letters in your poem's title; it seems a bit juvenile. An ingenuitive title can be the "draw-in" for your poem, so put some thought into it.
B- The actual body of your poem is fine. Short, but sweet. There isn't anything particularly ground-breaking in it - Regardless, it is cute.
C- In your "P.S." there are two grammatical errors. "Your" should be "You're", and "friends" should be friend's".
Good job, chica.

[Coyote Poetry]

Take no chance. Never know the result. A poem of dreams and desire. It is well written and tells a good story.
Coyote