Life

Friends get to be your best friends.
Then they are your worst enimys.
Before you know it they are talking about you . Not to you.
They will take all your friends and leave you a loner.
All the guys wont have boners.
at last you feel unable to survive then go out in the back yard to die inside. afterward you will finally brake and commit suicide.

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Check the spelling on a few words. Nice short free form poem. Suicide only hurts you. Things change in life so dramtically from when you are a teen to an adult.

[Coyote Poetry]

The movement of the poem was very good. A interesting story. Ending was sad. Life is long and suicide is never necessary. Just change your direction and find a better road. Poem is very good.
Coyote