I I I I I I

Thisthat Thisthat Thisthat Thisthat

No one I know knows me

No one I know knows me

No one I know knows me

No one I know knows me

 

You want someone just not me

You want someone just not me

You want someone just not me

You want someone just not me

 

I need more than I can ever have

I need more than I can ever have

I need more than I can ever have

I need more than I can ever have

 

My job pays me in malnourishment

My job pays me in malnourishment

My job pays me in malnourishment

My job pays me in malnourishment

 

I cried in my car on the way home from work last week

I cried in my car on the way home from work last week

I cried in my car on the way home from work last week

I cried in my car on the way home from work last week

 

Theres a voice between my legs and I want it dead

Theres a voice between my legs and I want it dead

Theres a voice between my legs and I want it dead

Theres a voice between my legs and I want it dead

 

There's tear-soaked paintings of God hanging in my head

There's tear-soaked paintings of God hanging in my head

There's tear-soaked paintings of God hanging in my head

There's tear-soaked paintings of God hanging in my head

 

Death doesn't always come at the end of one's life

Death doesn't always come at the end of one's life

Death doesn't always come at the end of one's life

Death doesn't always come at the end of one's life

 

Rhyming just rounds odd lines up to the nearest convenience

Rhyming just rounds odd lines up to the nearest convenience

Rhyming just rounds odd lines up to the nearest convenience

Rhyming just rounds odd lines up to the nearest convenience

 

Similies are cuter than metaphors

Similies are cuter than metaphors

Similies are cuter than metaphors

Similies are cuter than metaphors

 

Jesus was the closest mankind will get to a god

Jesus was the closest mankind will get to a god

Jesus was the closest mankind will get to a god

Jesus was the closest mankind will get to a god

 

This

Poem

Really

Sucks

 

I've heard a million words define life, but none of them are right

I've heard a million words define life, but none of them are right

I've heard a million words define life, but none of them are right

I've heard a million words define life, but none of them are right

 

The plot lines of movies compose my life line

The plot lines of movies compose my life line

The plot lines of movies compose my life line

The plot lines of movies compose my life line

 

I should have loved someone who loved me

I should have loved someone who loved me

I should have loved someone who loved me

I should have loved someone who loved me

 

Now I'll never know what will be

Now I'll never know what will be

Now I'll never know what will be

Now I'll never know what will be

 

I'm so unique I'm lonely

I'm so unique I'm lonely

I'm so unique I'm lonely

I'm so unique I'm lonely

 

I whine more than grapes crushed by life's bloody hands

I whine more than grapes crushed by life's bloody hands

I whine more than grapes crushed by life's bloody hands

I whine more than grapes crushed by life's bloody hands

 

I'm.................going to be alright

I'm.................going to be alright

I'm.................going to be alright

I'm.................going to be alright

Reviews

i think this is so raw and emotive...
i like the repetitious lines, although they felt a little tedious towards the end, but they're effective ^^
-nice write-
-ST