Too soon?

Too soon?

A Poem by Isolophobe
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Friendships. Relationships.

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There's so many things I want to tell you

But I don't know where to begin

Perhaps its best I just start with the end

I hate you

© 2008 Isolophobe


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Perhaps it is just best to start at the end....that is a brilliant line. Wish I had thought of it! Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem made me laugh. The way you start, it sounds so tentative and hesitant, something always seen in love poems. But then the end comes and brings you back to reality. Short, simple, and to the point. Very clever, two thumbs up.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 13, 2008

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Isolophobe
Isolophobe

Los Angeles, CA



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I am an engine. Do add me on facebook, if you're bored or uh want to. more..

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