Love me in eons
A Poem by
Island Hippy
ink showered a hail
of handsome words
on crumpled paper
love me in eons
rapid and slow
vast and intricate
let me luxuriate
in the rising heat
an unrepentant
benediction
of you.
© 2017 Island Hippy
Reviews
an unrepentant
benediction
of you.
that sounds mmm hot ... :)
enjoyed reading this..
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Mahalo Galadriel, I appreciate your visit.
rapid and slow why i love my man thanks for sharing the poetry.
Posted 7 Years Ago
rapid and slow why i love my man thanks for sharing the poetry.
7 Years Ago
Mahalo Roxane
ah the throes of love ... i love it! a very feel good poem for me....
Posted 7 Years Ago
ah the throes of love ... i love it! a very feel good poem for me....
7 Years Ago
Mahalo for the lovely comment
7 Years Ago
you are so welcome Ms. Hippy! :)
'.. an unrepentant ~ benediction ~ of you.'
Your words make love to love, dear Izzy. Beautiful.. memorable.. treasure.
Posted 7 Years Ago
'.. an unrepentant ~ benediction ~ of you.'
Your words make love to love, dear Izzy. Beautiful.. memorable.. treasure.
7 Years Ago
Awww ....YOU! aloha always xxx
7 Years Ago
Aloha you too, sweet mama. Beautiful words for a dreary night. xx
Nicely original & imaginative! I can feel the heat from here & I love the tangle of uncommon word choices! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 7 Years Ago
Nicely original & imaginative! I can feel the heat from here & I love the tangle of uncommon word choices! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
7 Years Ago
Aloha Margie, much mahalo for your great review. Much appreciated. Izzy
'love me in eons', that single line stands alone in your write here, Izzy! 'an unrepentant benediction of you', I love this.
Posted 7 Years Ago
'love me in eons', that single line stands alone in your write here, Izzy! 'an unrepentant benediction of you', I love this.
7 Years Ago
Aloha my friend, mahalo very much for your kind words x
7 Years Ago
You're welcome, Izzy. x
Wonderful title for your tender, graceful, loving poem my ohana. Eloquent yet sensuous, flowing and rhythmic like the union of lovers, yet so much more...” love me in eons”yes, may God always bless your love...
Posted 7 Years Ago
Wonderful title for your tender, graceful, loving poem my ohana. Eloquent yet sensuous, flowing and rhythmic like the union of lovers, yet so much more...” love me in eons”yes, may God always bless your love...
7 Years Ago
My ohana you make me feel like I know what I’m talking about ....haha. This feels a little differe.. read more My ohana you make me feel like I know what I’m talking about ....haha. This feels a little different for me but I love the end result. Much mahalo Kalani and me kisses and aloha always xxx
The contrasting images meld into coherence. There is a sense of transcendence and breathlessness culminating into the last three lines.
Posted 7 Years Ago
The contrasting images meld into coherence. There is a sense of transcendence and breathlessness culminating into the last three lines.
7 Years Ago
Aloha, mahalo for leaving a lovely review. Much appreciated. Izzy
A brief but poignant declaration of love that flows in adorable words and phrases Izzy.
Posted 7 Years Ago
A brief but poignant declaration of love that flows in adorable words and phrases Izzy.
7 Years Ago
Mahalo John x
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