Love me in eons

Love me in eons

A Poem by Island Hippy



ink showered a hail
of handsome words
on crumpled paper
love me in eons
rapid and slow
vast and intricate
let me luxuriate
in the rising heat
an unrepentant
benediction
of you.

© 2017 Island Hippy


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an unrepentant
benediction
of you.

that sounds mmm hot ... :)
enjoyed reading this..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Mahalo Galadriel, I appreciate your visit.
rapid and slow why i love my man thanks for sharing the poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Mahalo Roxane
ah the throes of love ... i love it! a very feel good poem for me....

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Mahalo for the lovely comment
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

you are so welcome Ms. Hippy! :)
'.. an unrepentant ~ benediction ~ of you.'

Your words make love to love, dear Izzy. Beautiful.. memorable.. treasure.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Awww ....YOU! aloha always xxx
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

Aloha you too, sweet mama. Beautiful words for a dreary night. xx
Nicely original & imaginative! I can feel the heat from here & I love the tangle of uncommon word choices! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Aloha Margie, much mahalo for your great review. Much appreciated. Izzy
'love me in eons', that single line stands alone in your write here, Izzy! 'an unrepentant benediction of you', I love this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Aloha my friend, mahalo very much for your kind words x
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, Izzy. x
Wonderful title for your tender, graceful, loving poem my ohana. Eloquent yet sensuous, flowing and rhythmic like the union of lovers, yet so much more...” love me in eons”yes, may God always bless your love...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

My ohana you make me feel like I know what I’m talking about ....haha. This feels a little differe.. read more
The contrasting images meld into coherence. There is a sense of transcendence and breathlessness culminating into the last three lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Aloha, mahalo for leaving a lovely review. Much appreciated. Izzy
A brief but poignant declaration of love that flows in adorable words and phrases Izzy.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Mahalo John x

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Island Hippy

Maui, Hawai’i



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