Poetry angels

For my poetry angels Emmajoy & Annette Pisano Higley .... with aloha.

I was lost in
the wilderness
of me, then
you drifted
in so gently

in messages
and poetry
in italic script
and wisdom
filled things

lifting me up
with kindness
pouring hope
into my dark
empty spaces

for you knew
there were
better days
to come, & I
found my smile

your warmth
washed over me
like the promise
of quiet, under
a tomorrow sky

where poetry
angels write
I sip words &
suddenly they're
here next to me.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

this is such a well said tribute to places like the Cafe' ... it lifts my own heart up to know that this has been your experience here .. the form is unique and creative having strength in 5 line verses ... yet it is free :) reading the frist two verses and getting to "things" ..i stopped to ask myself ..what did that rhyme with ..as the rhythm was so smooth it felt like that last line rhymed ..how cool! the Angels you mention certainly deserve such recognition ... we give pieces of ourselves and splash them all over the place and when someone picks some of them up and are blessed ...well...writing and sharing are well worth it ..nice one Ms. Hippy
peace and joy!
E.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha E, first I want to say I love your profile pic :)
The form was a happy accident but I'm glad it read well :)

I have been abundantly blessed by these wonderful ladies.... an encouraging word a message out of the blue to say 'how are you doing..... I'm thinking of you' they are words that I'm so grateful for.
Mahalo again for your wonderful review. Izzy

[Einstein Noodle]

back at'cha ....;)

[Ken Simm.]

So lovely for both of them. Angels indeed.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha my friend, mahalo for stopping by x