After all

I spent months and months
not writing a single word

and then you came back
into my life, long enough

to balance my happy
with your misery.

that helps the words
flow, easy and smooth

turns out you were good
for somethin' after all,

thanks

a*****e.

Reviews

[Rassoul]

As a writer you should always have something in mind to write about, even the darkest places in your heart can be written about.

Well done.

[B]

lol
Words of inspiration could come from the strangest places
even the most broken hearts
have so much to say

Really well done

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo, that's true :) I appreciate your visit

[Mariwel Lao]

This is true.. a person would try to bother you again once they get bore of their miserable life, hoping that you will join their misery..

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo Mariwel, I appreciate your comment and time

[Mariwel Lao]

You're most welcome. :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Well-said my ohana... succinct ode to an "a*****e"-ha! "To balance my happy with your misery"...great line. Love your honesty girl!

[Island Hippy]

I aloha your reviews my ohana x

[Chris]

Such BITE! Gives truth to "misery loves company" doesn't it? Seems "Paradise" is more Lost than lived anymore.

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo Chris :) great comment!

[Chris]

Is a "real and meant" comment... sigh

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A succinct and cutting piece and I hope they get the message! There are some rather nasty folk on here and I have been trolled and my page copied and used to attack people so I relate to this completely Izzy. We need to fight back and not run otherwise they win.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha John, I'm so sorry to hear that. I had a bad experience when I first joined the cafe in Feb. that put me off so much that I left for a few months but decided to give it a go again in April and I'm glad I did. Mahalo for your comment and time

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol the last word just about killed it 😛
That's awesome writing and made me laugh 😛
I can actually relate though I wouldn't dare call that person in my life an a*****e haha
Cool piece, Izzy 👍

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Yumna, your comment made me chuckle. Mahalo much :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Izzy. A pleasure always reading your works 😊

[Gee]

Lol...... AND DON'T LET THE DOOR HIT YER ARSE ON THE WAY OUT...A*****E

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Gee .... haha Mahalo for the drop in

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wonder why we seem to only find balance in writing when the words express pain...happy just "don't" come easy.

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo Jacob, I appreciate your visit.

[emmajoy]

OHHHH wicked you! Oh gosh,having a late night's laugh this night! And, bound to keep me awake even later now! Ok, so he was a pain in the kneecap, and yes, he deserves your venom.. beautifully laid too.. but that last word, why madam, how could you!

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Em, haha .... I throw words like that every now and then :) I always appreciate your visits Em. Mahalo beautiful friend x

[emmajoy]

Good morning, Smile-maker!