Dance with me

take me dancing
on Saturday night
when the fever
starts long and slow

my night potion;
physical, spiritual
emotion - always
arriving bought &
paid for with smiling
touching eyes
of such fondness,
sweeping & delicate

take me flying with,
dancing feet my darling
fingertips meet my senses,
no climbing fences
sparking this excess
of colliding souls - lead
me into temptation,
soothe my need, take me
dancing on Saturday night

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. Dancing, best way to escape life and have some fun. Music and song make us know laughter and the dance. We need both. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Island Hippy]

'Ae dancing is a great escape. Mahalo for your visit John.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Izzy. Dancing is where we are free for a time.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so much goes into dancing...i relate to this because that is my favorite activity...to just feel the music takes us places with a partner or just with ourselves...it is like being in a rhythmic trance.
j.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Jacob, that's lovely to know. It is a lovely escape. Mahalo for your visit.

[emmajoy]

.. paid for with smiling ~ touching eyes ~ of such fondness, ~ sweeping & delicate .. '

Sweet, slow and oh so real. No perfumed flowers, no hidden agenda.. just good old-fashioned loving Everything!

[Island Hippy]

Aloha beautiful Em :) 'ae good old fashioned loving everything. Mahalo always my friend for your visit. x

[emmajoy]

Aloha, lovely woman! It's always a pleasure to visit and read. Be happy..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I really liked the soft sensual touch to this. Almost felt as if your words were dancing down the page 😉😊
I enjoyed reading this. Nicely penned, Izzy 😊

[Island Hippy]

Aloha my friend that's such a lovely warm comment. Mahalo :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Izzy. A pleasure always 😊

[Paul Bell]

I'm on the way Izzy. Try and keep the bump in when i'm throwing you over my shoulder. Or are you at the slow dance stage yet.

[Island Hippy]

Lol... Aloha Paul :) you're one of a kind! Love a man who can throw a girl over his shoulder...lol. The most entertaining comment ever. Mahalo Paul x

[Paul Bell]

Used to be a caveman Izzy.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This has simplicity and a romanticism to it. Flowing and gentle.

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo John, I appreciate your kind comment

[Lorry]

Despite the fact that I have two left feet and about as much elegance and élan as an electrocuted rhino, I still felt the sway and hypnotic rhythm of your words.....and didn't fall off the sofa once :)
Sounds to me like someone has got happy feet :)

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Nemo, lol I'm sure you don't my friend I bet you can two step :) or maybe you need the right lass leading you. 'Ae happy feet and a happy heart! Mahalo my friend

[Lorry]

Ha, think i'll have to wait for the day I can get those robot feet :)

[Ana B.]

We all need that night potion every now and then. Lovely poem, creating an relaxing, easy feeling of letting go for a night and vibrate with the music.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha lovely Ana, mahalo for your warm comment. I appreciate the drop in :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Feeling the rhythm, heat and passion! Great job!

[Island Hippy]

Mahalo Annette :)