Servatis

First and most importantly, I am an impatient person by nature, and all too often, this shows up in my writing. Please pay close attention to my sentence structure and the pace of the storyline when you review, since these tend to be my problem areas. If you see ways I can improve those areas, then by all means, please tell me.
Secondly, please don't judge these characters and their species based on preconceived notions of their kind. Ours are a little different than most, and I'd prefer for them to be looked at for their own merits.