On the fence

On the fence

A Poem by Isick the poet
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As i sit and stared at these birds i started to personify their actions as they sit for a while and decide if they want the company of others until they fly away.

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Can a bird fall in love?
Can a bird break apart?
Does a bird fly away?
Does a bird perch a stay?

Can a bird have a heart?
Can a bird give enough?
Does a bird face the pain?
Does a bird turn away?

© 2019 Isick the poet


Author's Note

Isick the poet
Trying to get a concept on structure and conncection with the reader. Im just an amature i write what i feel and dont really focus on grammar mind me for now and it will get better.

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lot of questions in your poem and if I can offer any help maybe a bit of humour at ending.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on January 5, 2019
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Tags: Birds, fence, break up, fly away, actions, emotion, gathering, company, sad, human

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Isick the poet
Isick the poet

Austin, TX



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I write to clear my mind from the thoughts inside my head. I write to fuel my soul with the words i want to spread. From thoughts to action and energy transfered. From intellect induced by my own .. more..

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