Starving

So cold

So empty

I only little crumbs

It's eating away at me

So hungry

I can't survive this way

Waiting 

Enduring

I'll only have you

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Starving for food aches the stomach; yet starving for love aches the heart. I would normally admire these kinds of poems; though the length, I'm afraid, weakens what the concept tries to portray. Perhaps you'd consider revising this and adding a stanza, two maybe? I do feel you'd capture the loneliness better that way.

[Isibi]

Ironic considering I shortened it because I thought it was too wordy. I'll see what I can do

[Isibi]

Missing my husband