o dear heart!

o dear heart!

A Poem by Ishwar Grewal
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it is about a conversation a person has with the heart, telling the heart to be strong this time.

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O dear heart.... ❤
I know you like to be around him,
A moment away from him and you start to dim....
You race when you are about to meet him, 
But you slow down infront of him....
Why would you give me strokes of muddled beats out of nowhere,
Don't you know you can't be around him in every affair??
So why do you take goodbyes so heavy on you??
Why do you feel so restless??
Why do you still care when he could not care any less??
He broke you into tiny little pieces..tore you apart,
But why Have you summoned up again, o dear heart!
How can you be stone cold to everything else and melt at the same time when it comes to him?

Look at those hearts who are happy to see you...
Look at those hearts who care for you...   
Look at those hearts who want the best for you... 
There's plenty of them!!

Then why would you still want the heart who cannot be yours??
Why are you ready to spend a moment with him when you know that the loss will be yours??
O dear heart!
Be strong this time,
Please do not summon up this time.

© 2017 Ishwar Grewal


Author's Note

Ishwar Grewal
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Powerful use of words and thoughts. I liked the real life feel and the emotions shared in the poetry. Thank you Ishwar for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ishwar Grewal

6 Years Ago

Thank you for such a beautiful review.. :)
m glad that u like it.... :)
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Yess am touched!! A silent letter to heart...a great read☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ishwar Grewal

6 Years Ago

Thank you Tahsin.Z ..... :))
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6 Years Ago

Heartedly welcomed!
"How can you be stone cold to everything else and melt at the same time when it comes to him?"
This is heart-touching indeed! I think the heart when unleashed can be troublesome and there is no stopping it.. I liked reading this! Good work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ishwar Grewal

7 Years Ago

thank you so much.....appreciate your review...m glad you liked it.
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You are welcome! A pleasure :)
Great poem. It touched me! You wrote something many can relate to and done it with such well written verses. Tyfs! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ishwar Grewal

7 Years Ago

thank you so much @Cyprian van dyke
Cyprian Van Dyke

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome :)

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Added on December 28, 2016
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Ishwar Grewal
Ishwar Grewal

chandigarh, India



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