Left Room For Us

Living in the past...

As the days, turn to weeks.

Thoughts of what we were,

Constantly haunt me even in my dreams.

Perhaps in another life time we'll hold hands again.

There, we shall have no reason to be apart.

Till then, only the memories will alleviate the pain-

A reminder that you are the keeper of my heart.

I left room for us

And I'm just waiting for your return

I left room for us

Till then you are the only one I yearn

In each others arms we will be once more,

Partaking in the dance of love just as before.

*Keii

Reviews

[Kerra]

I can feel a longing in your words, this is really good. I can feel your emotions

[𝓑lack 𝓛ion 𝓯rom 𝓽he 𝓢outh]

Thank u- I do my best to express how I feel in every piece

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is never fair. We don't appreciate love till she is gone.
"I left room for us
And I'm just waiting for your return
I left room for us
Till then you are the only one I yearn"
I understand the above lines and I learn. You can't return from where you left. Thank you Israel for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[𝓑lack 𝓛ion 𝓯rom 𝓽he 𝓢outh]

True words Coyote. I appreciate the positive reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[bianca]

"We left room for ourselves
And I can't wait for your return."
I really thought this was true, but it was just a wish because not all people are going to come back to you. Maybe never because it didn't work and you don't have to be the only one who wants to be able to say "we/us" when you talk about him/her and you. I enjoyed your words and remembered my old version. Only our "soulmate" will eventually come back in our lives.

[𝓑lack 𝓛ion 𝓯rom 𝓽he 𝓢outh]

I agree with u- not everyone will return, however that doesn't stop a person from wanting or wishing. Losing (or being separated from) the one u love is always going to be painful especially when u've been with them for so long. It's almost as if u've lost a part of u.

Accepting that they will never return is indeed necessary... but it will also be the hardest part of moving on.

Anyway thank u for your review

[bianca]

You're welcome. Moving on is the hardest part but at the same time the moment when you focus more on yourself and ur needs. I know it's easy to say , and hard when it comes to face this stage after an ended relationship, but this is the truth.

[Najam Us Saher]

Very heart touching poem. Loved it.

[𝓑lack 𝓛ion 𝓯rom 𝓽he 𝓢outh]

I'm honoured. Thank u

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.