Inner devil spirit

You proffered me the wrong path,

I became subsequent to that outer beauty.

Without knowing the inside caliginosity,

Involuntarily functioned brain made me do deeds which were not meant for me.

I sensed an overcoming threat,

But you subjugated me and I unwantedly committed mistakes.

Once again proved that everything glitters is not always gold,

I be the victim, you be the virus;

I be the prey, you be the predator.

One day my angel opened her eyes,

With her supervision I was shown the path to glory,

 A need for revolutionary change,

With utmost fortitude,

I aimed at killing the devil inside,

The war full of stumbling blocks and stepping stones,

But optimism and conviction,

I killed the virus created by me sometime ago,

This brought peace and serenity,

peace and serenity in my life.

I sent that devil me to hell,

And I in the wait for heaven.

Reviews

[fadingtale]

This is so beautiful! I really love the word choice you used and the imagery! Thanks for writing this beautiful piece!

[Ishaan Kumar]

Thank you!!

[Kaustubh Pandey]

Apart from some grammatical errors, a good poem.