Dear Death,

Why do you do what

you do

why do you take the ones we

love

Is it cause someone

hurt you

somebody took the one you

love

so you do it to others

just to make fun of those

even some that didn't hurt you

why shall that pain

come to us all one day

or the other

why shall we all meet 

this disastrous fate

some go quietly

others go with a bang

can you explain

why this happens

why can't we all go back in time

one and all

to see our family and friends

 

Dear Death,

 

why do we forget those

special times and friends that

will always care to us

but remember  those painful

times and enimes;

them hurtful break-ups

those destructive times

them evil crushes

those horrible dates and movies

them killer waves

tsunamis ,volcanoes

and earthquakes

 

 

Dear Death,

 

why do we live if were just coming to

you

why do we wait

why must life slap us in the face

why  must we hurt

 

Dear Death,

can I go

Dear death,

dear death

 

Reviews

[terry smith]

Death gets more questions than Santa Claus...I just try to remember...everything dies. Very good writing!

[A. Amos]

I loved it once in a while we all ask these questions, you my friend turned into a poetry. Bravo!

[Kelly Scheppers]

There's a chill to this that intrigues me...

[Isabella]

Thank you especially for reading till' the end

[Chris]

Touching and felt... I listened all the way through.

[Isabella]

Thank you I know it was quite long... I appreciate your kind words

[Chris]

length is never an issue for me...especially when it has such content.

[Isabella]

thank you ... your words are very helpful Chris