No One Knows You

Don't want anyone

to know

what you feel inside

you say you

don't really care but

you know it's a lie

you know that

emotionally you are very weak

you'll burst in a second

that's all you need

you would rather be alone

less drama and headache

but when you are alone

there's  no one there to ease your pain

 

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I really like this, and can relate to this from time to time. Sometimes it is hard to imagine someone knowing how we feel and such, but it is also comforting having someone there to listen and show understanding. I think the only thing I would consider changing is headache to heartache, but that's just me.

Good Job

[terry smith]

Been there...lived that!! very good writing.

[Edward Lancheister]

good word expression blend with light words so become easy for reader to get the message inside the poem quickly :)

thanks for share

[Isabella]

thank you very much...