In Pain

In pain not knowing what to

do

I come to you

I do not know

and now I am scared

I do not know what he wants nor

what he may be doing

Is it that he feels pity for because I've

had some difficult times,

Is it that he wants

a piece of a*s

or does he really love me like he says

Don't really know how to come out and ask

the question that's been bouncing around in my head

wanting to know

and be in his head

puts me in pain not knowing

what to do

 

 

Reviews

[AMarie]

I came to check out your work as well.. This poem conveys the uncertainty of love. Every woman goes through these emotions, and you did a great job setting poetry in motion. Beautiful work.

[Isabella]

Thank you, your words are kind and they remind me that I am not alone.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Sweet sorrows like chocolate with a universal theme. You make me want to come to you Isabella and relieve your pain.

[Isabella]

Thank you but my pain cant be lifted from my childhood to now it is too much to bear.