A Poem about Nothing in Particular

I wanted to write, but couldn't come up with a good topic

Slow submersion in bottomless boredom,

Mind seething, fingers itching.

“Type!” hollers the blank document,

As brain beckons to poetic genius.

Piggy-bank of thoughts rattles,

Skim... scan...skip!

‘Nature’? monotonously misinterpreted,

‘Friendship’? overtly overrated,‘

Love’? slightly sickening,

‘Heartbreak’?  verily worn out,

‘Depression’? too depressing,

‘Death’? utterly ultimate,

‘Family’? ‘Food’? ‘Fantasy’?

‘Naps’, maybe?

Maybe I should just take one instead.

Reviews

[Stonz P.]

Okay right now... I have only one thing to say: chocolates.

The punctuations bothered me (you know they would :P)
and power naps are my favourite parts of a tired day... I would suggest to make an interconnecting pattern like nature, friendship, love, heartbreak, depression... something like that.. don't change the anecdotes unless you think of something better.. I like them anyhow.. just the order of the quoted subjects..

I feel the same at times.. :| I have nothing to write these days too... Maybe if I didn't waste SO MUCH TIME at nights :P

[Isabel25]

Suggestion employed- it was a good one too....
Deal with the punctuation!!!!!!

And hello??? NOONE ASKED YOU TO WASTE SO MUCH TIME AT NIGHTS!!!!

[Stonz P.]

Yeah... Now it flows better than before too..

And what can I do??? People!!!! I'm too polite to decline.

[Isabel25]

oh shadduppppp!!!............

[613]

Not everyone on here is a "professional" writer. Some people just write for fun. I'm tired of hearing about everyone's punctuation needing help. Unless you've been published yourself by a credible source, you don't have much credibility yourself. Just saying!

[Isabel25]

Ohh Brittney..he is just pulling my leg..he's actually a nice guy..really :) Thank you for defending but :) :*

[613]

Oh no, I was just stating something that has been on MY nerves for a while. Lol.

[Isabel25]

Haha..okay........yes..seems like punctuation bothers everyone