Fangs

Fangs

A Poem by Rebecca Isherwood
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Written 10-16-2008. Enjoy.

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Reach out with

Forcep fingers

Towards a hormonal

Scent that lingers

Come into my

Barbed wire embrace

Biting flesh to

Feel a heart race

Drawing lines

In flushed skin

Spilling forth the

Warmth within

Taste of metal

Color of death

Lights shut out

Stolen breath.

© 2008 Rebecca Isherwood


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I love this vampire poem. Very beautiful. Excellent work with this piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago
I think it's true what your poem is trying to portray, but I have always thought of a vampire as sexy and seductive. Isn't that how they get their prey? I need more seduction to this piece before the truth of his motive is revealed.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on December 25, 2008

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Rebecca Isherwood
Rebecca Isherwood

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I'm a Jane of all trades. I might as well be a centipede for all the things I have a hand in. I'm interested in all forms of art; Poetry, Photography, Drawing, Sculpture, Arts in general, Music, Lyric.. more..

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