I am presently writing another Western, this time a full-length novel, so I have gunslingers on the brain at the moment! This song came to me in the middle of the night while I was trying to figure out what Jeb Cassidy would be getting up to next!
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As we've discussed, I love the WEST!! I guess it is all a part of living in Texas and on a ranch. That's why I chose Belle Star(r) as my name here. Notorious outlaw... I am not an outlaw... But.... Sometimes I think some of the bad guys might have had some good qualities. Sorry, I digress, about your writing.... I LOVE this piece too. BUT, I have not lost all hope for the outlaw in this poem.... I am sure he has some redeeming qualities, especially if some call him saviour or friend? I am a ... HOPEFUL... person even though I am the notorious Belle Starr!!
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
You live on a ranch? God, I'm green with envy now! I love horses, so the thought of living on a ranc.. read moreYou live on a ranch? God, I'm green with envy now! I love horses, so the thought of living on a ranch is heaven.
I wrote this, as mentioned above, because I can't stop thinking about gunslingers at the moment.
Perhaps I will work Belle Starr into the next book!
Wasn't she cosy with Cole Younger at one point?
This reminds me of the way country songs USED to sound . . . the way it was done by Pure Prairie League & Marshall Tucker Band & Charlie Daniels Band, back in the day (& still a little bit today). The language is done in an artfully poetic way, just the way those old wrangling songs used to do -- simple concepts, but stated in original way. It's rare to whip out so many verses & still have it sound good & flow well (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie
Lol! Thank you, Margie. It's intended to be a blues rock number, but if one of those guys wanted to .. read moreLol! Thank you, Margie. It's intended to be a blues rock number, but if one of those guys wanted to record it I wouldn't have a problem with that. I would love someone to record it!
6 Years Ago
I used to listen to country rock which has blues influence, from way back in the day! Here's wishing.. read moreI used to listen to country rock which has blues influence, from way back in the day! Here's wishing you the best in advancing your songwriting! *smile*
6 Years Ago
Yes, sometimes country rock can be hard to distinguish from either blues or rock, except for the cow.. read moreYes, sometimes country rock can be hard to distinguish from either blues or rock, except for the cowboy hats and steel guitars! :)
Thank you for the good wishes.
Lol! I'd love to hear it, too! But no longer have a band to record it with, so I would like someone .. read moreLol! I'd love to hear it, too! But no longer have a band to record it with, so I would like someone else to record it.
Glad you liked it though.
6 Years Ago
ha, i have a lot of stuff i would love for someone to record too :) so if you find someone then pl.. read moreha, i have a lot of stuff i would love for someone to record too :) so if you find someone then please let me know!
6 Years Ago
I will do that, my friend. What we need is a young, up and coming band who need songwriters!
As we've discussed, I love the WEST!! I guess it is all a part of living in Texas and on a ranch. That's why I chose Belle Star(r) as my name here. Notorious outlaw... I am not an outlaw... But.... Sometimes I think some of the bad guys might have had some good qualities. Sorry, I digress, about your writing.... I LOVE this piece too. BUT, I have not lost all hope for the outlaw in this poem.... I am sure he has some redeeming qualities, especially if some call him saviour or friend? I am a ... HOPEFUL... person even though I am the notorious Belle Starr!!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
You live on a ranch? God, I'm green with envy now! I love horses, so the thought of living on a ranc.. read moreYou live on a ranch? God, I'm green with envy now! I love horses, so the thought of living on a ranch is heaven.
I wrote this, as mentioned above, because I can't stop thinking about gunslingers at the moment.
Perhaps I will work Belle Starr into the next book!
Wasn't she cosy with Cole Younger at one point?
This brought back pleasant memories of my father... watching his favorite western movies with him, while pretending to be the fastest gun in the west. Really enjoyed this ride, thank you! Great write!
Lol! Thanks, Travis. I know exactly what you mean - my Dad and I used to do the same thing. The bann.. read moreLol! Thanks, Travis. I know exactly what you mean - my Dad and I used to do the same thing. The bannister rail was my horse! :D
6 Years Ago
Mine was our unusually tall Dalmatian named, Duke. Lol
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