I work in a congressional office and I see this destruction every day. Politicians encouraging young men and women to join the military to fight for the country, yet they are not willing to wear the boots themselves. It expresses the selfish entities politics has against people and It needs to be solved. Thank you for a beautiful read.
Thank you for your kind words. It must be difficult watching the politicians in action every day. Pe.. read moreThank you for your kind words. It must be difficult watching the politicians in action every day. Perhaps you could get some of them to read this? :) No, don't do that, they might have you shot! :D
6 Years Ago
I will read them one day once I have won the fight between pen VS. tounge. They might not listen, bu.. read moreI will read them one day once I have won the fight between pen VS. tounge. They might not listen, but they can for damn sure read.
6 Years Ago
Are you sure about that? :)
I understand the average IQ is somewhere around room temperature!
I work in a congressional office and I see this destruction every day. Politicians encouraging young men and women to join the military to fight for the country, yet they are not willing to wear the boots themselves. It expresses the selfish entities politics has against people and It needs to be solved. Thank you for a beautiful read.
Thank you for your kind words. It must be difficult watching the politicians in action every day. Pe.. read moreThank you for your kind words. It must be difficult watching the politicians in action every day. Perhaps you could get some of them to read this? :) No, don't do that, they might have you shot! :D
6 Years Ago
I will read them one day once I have won the fight between pen VS. tounge. They might not listen, bu.. read moreI will read them one day once I have won the fight between pen VS. tounge. They might not listen, but they can for damn sure read.
6 Years Ago
Are you sure about that? :)
I understand the average IQ is somewhere around room temperature!
ABSOLUTELY!!!! Having one of my sons in the US Army, and a specialist at that, I think the politicians should have to shield HIM if he is ever called into the field.
So well written, my friend.
Oh, and with the onslaught of holiday cheer - wishing you a peaceful and beautiful Yule.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you, PL. What a wonderful variant - politicians as personal body shields for those who really .. read moreThank you, PL. What a wonderful variant - politicians as personal body shields for those who really matter! Let's make the president and his cronies your son's personal bodyguard!
Merry Christmas to you and your family, too! Have a cup of cheer and burn a Yule log for me.
I hear your battle cry and I seen so many come back crippled and maimed then there are the deceased the ones who gave it their all and ended up at Arlington Cemetery with a flag covering their Casket.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Yes, it is terribly sad and such a waste of life.
Thank you for taking the time to read and r.. read moreYes, it is terribly sad and such a waste of life.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review this. I am glad you liked it.
This is so intensely sarcastic & palpably scornful, I just wanna pee! I couldn't agree with you more, always love reading Coyote John, as this is his main refrain . . . but still, as creatively as John discusses this topic regularly, you've swooped in & blown him out of the water with your amazing sharp wit & brilliant satire. Word choices are snappy, as is the rhyme & rhythm. This is a very killer message that makes me want to blow a gasket on something that's bugging me (out of the dozens of bugnesses in today's world). Just love this immensely! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for all your kind words, Margie. I am super chuffed that you enjoyed it so much.
I agree my friend.
"The politicians like war so much,
Let's send them to the trenches,
Let's see how much they like it,
When they are not sitting on the benches."
If the old men want to fight. They are willing to send the young men. If the old men had to fight. Would be no-more war. Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
Coyote
Thank you, Coyote. It is good to find people who share my sentiments. :)
6 Years Ago
I hate war. I tell people. If you accept war as a norm. War will find you. War will come to your doo.. read moreI hate war. I tell people. If you accept war as a norm. War will find you. War will come to your doorstep. You are welcome.
Should be compulsory for politicians to go to war.
In reality, they wouldn't be missed.
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6 Years Ago
I couldn't agree more! I've advocated loading them all on to a cruise liner then sinking it in mid-A.. read moreI couldn't agree more! I've advocated loading them all on to a cruise liner then sinking it in mid-Atlantic for years! :)
This absolutely reminds me of the Black Sabbath song, "War Pigs".
Definitely lyrical in its execution.
Me likes, my friend.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks, NG. I have that album! In fact, I am thinking of adding a chorus to this to make a song vers.. read moreThanks, NG. I have that album! In fact, I am thinking of adding a chorus to this to make a song version. I already have the bass riff.
Aspiring new writer. I enjoy writing stories, poems and song lyrics. In fact most of my poems are song lyrics! All constructive input is welcome. If you think something sucks, tell me so. I won't be o.. more..