Okay, but the last stanza is actually perfection.
This poem is easy to digest while containing some lovely phrasing such as "gilded distance." The Call of the Wild reminds me of the same named book; I wonder, if you've read it? I think probably, but anyway, I agree that nature is very healing. It also makes us humble as we truly are just a speck in the lifetime of the world, or even simply, of our surroundings in this current world.
Thank you, Chryiss. If you are referring to the Jack London book 'Call of the Wild', yes, I have rea.. read moreThank you, Chryiss. If you are referring to the Jack London book 'Call of the Wild', yes, I have read it, but it was back when I was bout twelve years old, which was a long time ago!
5 Years Ago
You're welcome~ Yes, I was referring to Jack London, and I read it a long time ago, too. Although, I.. read moreYou're welcome~ Yes, I was referring to Jack London, and I read it a long time ago, too. Although, I don't remember all the details, I remember having liked it. This poem was a nice reminder of that feeling. ^^
I agree my friend.
"There is peace in the wilderness,
It can bring its peace to you."
I need a year away from the city and the sea near. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
You are very welcome, my friend. Thank you for your kind words. I hope you get your year away from t.. read moreYou are very welcome, my friend. Thank you for your kind words. I hope you get your year away from the city. If you do, enjoy it to the max.
Aspiring new writer. I enjoy writing stories, poems and song lyrics. In fact most of my poems are song lyrics! All constructive input is welcome. If you think something sucks, tell me so. I won't be o.. more..