I truly love this poem. As an individual who has just chosen to pursue their passion in architecture instead of the more prestigious considered career of Civil Engineering, it is truly appreciated. So often people plan their entire lives on a basis of money & possessions. They are important for survival, yes, and arguably comfort, but are surly not what truly instill meaning in life.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you for taking the time to read and review this; it is truly appreciated. I am glad that it re.. read moreThank you for taking the time to read and review this; it is truly appreciated. I am glad that it resonated with you; so many people lose sight of what is truly important in their lives. I wish you good fortune in pursuing your dream!
Always hear of the poor city traders burning out at a young age. Play hard and fast, it'll never last.
Nothing wrong with ambition. But when you go back to an empty house, wife gone, children grown up and gone. Was it worth it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Absolutely spot on, Paul. They never seem to learn until it is too late.
You covered a lot of ground in these verses. So much of what we deal with in life, especially during our working years. The last verse couldn't be anymore true. My husband is a workaholic. He doesn't know the meaning of the word fun. Perhaps, that is why he stays so stressed all the time? We MUST be true to ourselves, and follow our dreams; otherwise, what is the point in life? It is indeed too short to do the wrong thing. The only regret I have is letting people into my life that didn't deserve to be there. All of us need to "stop and smell the roses" so to speak. Nice ink! :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you. I could not agree more with your comments. Loss of a sense of fun is the top of a very st.. read moreThank you. I could not agree more with your comments. Loss of a sense of fun is the top of a very steep downhill slope. Keep on smiling!
7 Years Ago
So true. When I was a working girl, my boss at the hospital I worked for said on one of my job eval.. read moreSo true. When I was a working girl, my boss at the hospital I worked for said on one of my job evaluations that one of the things she appreciated about me was the fact that I always had a smile on my face. :)
Aspiring new writer. I enjoy writing stories, poems and song lyrics. In fact most of my poems are song lyrics! All constructive input is welcome. If you think something sucks, tell me so. I won't be o.. more..