Day by day

Day by day

A Poem by Winter
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I felt like posting something here so here goes whatever comes out of my head.

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I dread the next day
I have come to dread everyday 
for each one I live
the life of another not mine
I can never live
the life that first meant for me
this life I now live
is a prison unfamiliar 
my soul is now trapped 
in bones it never knew and foreign flesh 
the torture never dies
and my hopeless cries cover my smile
now and forever

© 2010 Winter


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Winter
sorry

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i like this one the best. im really into poetry that rhymes as u can tell when u read mine but this one i rather like.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw.
Very meaningful, love.
I liked it lot, and I know what you're talking about so I could connect well with the poem.

My only suggestions for future pieces is to try not to use the same words twice in a poem, if you can avoid it. Try finding syllables for some of the repeated words and it'll add a lot of variety.

Very nice poem though, I love it ^^

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I really like writing ... just stuff, I sometimes write stories, I've recently started writing poems, I also like writing new things, and trying new ideas for writing ... or at least I think I do, lat.. more..

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