The deepest part of me I guard safely. Until my soul is home with my twin, my missing piece, the flame. My alpha.
This full moon in the sky machine moves the damn sea what great wonders it offers no price no fee.i copulate with dreams ive been dreaming all my f*****g life. I Still scream in caged shame F**k these empty robots im a vixen from another time, my s**t is abnormal so what, ive been schooled by the f*****g loanshsrks of pain,for me i took that s**t yes for me it was only gain,a hefty load however i know my name and from where i came we are the loyal our foundation is unbreakable Try to beat that s**t with all those faces. a good nights rest and i never did see eye to eye. Here is the dream the night i could see truthfully no lies just our heartbeats. My other half my link of mad love i can smell you everywhere, our skin tainted from past times. In my vague reason i have tasted what can never be mine. I wish with all my might to have tonights the night till i die..
lovely. i must consider this "poetry in prose" one of my favorites. so many deepest things of your deepen heart have you nicely licked deep down in such... heartfelt words. may be, here you kinda portraying a life of someone who keeps passing through dark shades of life even in a day, & wandering for some shine on nights at all. such a beautiful imagery you painted here around in words. amazing. enjoyed reading it!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Andrew, thank you from my truest heart. I have this ache this fever for writing. I know that when an.. read moreAndrew, thank you from my truest heart. I have this ache this fever for writing. I know that when another writer takes the time to read, judge, and gives me there thoughts to my art, is the very thing that makes my heart swell.. Thank you again..
Andrew, thank you from my truest heart. I have this ache this fever for writing. I know that when an.. read moreAndrew, thank you from my truest heart. I have this ache this fever for writing. I know that when another writer takes the time to read, judge, and gives me there thoughts to my art, is the very thing that makes my heart swell.. Thank you again..
Deana
8 Years Ago
Andrew? not a bad name. always enjoy when ladies dub me with "too many" horniest names that oft. bel.. read moreAndrew? not a bad name. always enjoy when ladies dub me with "too many" horniest names that oft. belong to my womanizer personality. interesting thing.
lovely. i must consider this "poetry in prose" one of my favorites. so many deepest things of your deepen heart have you nicely licked deep down in such... heartfelt words. may be, here you kinda portraying a life of someone who keeps passing through dark shades of life even in a day, & wandering for some shine on nights at all. such a beautiful imagery you painted here around in words. amazing. enjoyed reading it!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Andrew, thank you from my truest heart. I have this ache this fever for writing. I know that when an.. read moreAndrew, thank you from my truest heart. I have this ache this fever for writing. I know that when another writer takes the time to read, judge, and gives me there thoughts to my art, is the very thing that makes my heart swell.. Thank you again..
Andrew, thank you from my truest heart. I have this ache this fever for writing. I know that when an.. read moreAndrew, thank you from my truest heart. I have this ache this fever for writing. I know that when another writer takes the time to read, judge, and gives me there thoughts to my art, is the very thing that makes my heart swell.. Thank you again..
Deana
8 Years Ago
Andrew? not a bad name. always enjoy when ladies dub me with "too many" horniest names that oft. bel.. read moreAndrew? not a bad name. always enjoy when ladies dub me with "too many" horniest names that oft. belong to my womanizer personality. interesting thing.
You write with so much power and confidence. Raw and truthful with a touch of angst. Enjoy your writing.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you kindly.. My heart is just my heart, pain is so vivid in my truth. I have this though. I ha.. read moreThank you kindly.. My heart is just my heart, pain is so vivid in my truth. I have this though. I have words bursting from my mind.. This writing thing is massive. I naturally could not help my love for the blessing and of course curse to just write my heart out.. I thank you again. Good day to you Pete.. Always D.Marie. x
I must say I owe everything to my mom and my dad. They are the foundation of my entity, my rock and roll, my DNA.
For them my gratitude is forever healthy. I am absolutely certain I was born into t.. more..