Onyx

Intrigued is intriguing.

This body I operate, it is my flesh and bone, my throne. Polished with a precious disguise that only see from the wild side. Fire is in my blood, like octane fuel. On borrowed time with premeditated sin that never pulled the wool over my eyes. Studied your teachings, persuasion is the dress I wear. In this bed I made I will lay with a soul like a rolling stone.


By~ Deana Marie, 2015

Author's Note

I feel depths when reading this piece..

Reviews

[θεά]

There is something very layered, very deep about your writing, which is unique more so because of it's brevity and simple words. The inner self is yet to be probed, yet to be discovered, more by the self first than the other.

Intimate piece of writing and very thought-provoking.
Keep up the good work.

Best,
M.

[Deana Marie]

A massive thank you!! My soul is so very willow tree. I have a simple chaotic mind. I am eager for growth in my own flavor. I deeply appreciate your review as well as your time for showing me your recognition.. Absolute!

Deana Marie

[WoodenChair]

onyx was traditionally used by English midwives to ease childbirth by laying a stone between the breasts of the mother, superstitiously

[Deana Marie]

Very good to learn of this. I had no idea. I chose the word Onyx as the title ,for a rebel purpose, for the purpose in which woman underestimates her gifts,her natural design. A lady always has the trump. Thank you for this information.

[WoodenChair]

Such irony, her symbol of rebellion now lies between her chest

[None]

It's luring piece, in it's simplicity the reader is forced to ask that age old question "Who Am I Really?" And perhaps the brave reader who willing to let this questions' flashlight shine will venture the depths of Awareness.

[Deana Marie]

Heno, please forgive me for my lack of a quick response.. I thank you deeply for taking your time and placing beautiful chosen words for the literature of my heart. Kindly grateful.

Deana