The hurt in the dark

The hurt in the dark

A Poem by Irishrite

It tickled, in such a hurtful way. A way no one should have to experience.
In the dark, where there were no faces. No traces. No places I could go.
You took life from me and made me live with it. All the wrong. The ugly dark wrongs.
Ashamed of it all. Yet learned so much from you. How to hate from a deep within for all my days. I thank you for molding me into a broken shell of a hateful, hurtful soul. I have a lot of feeling inside and it amounts to nothing at all.
So many years. Tears, beers, cheers to you.

© 2018 Irishrite


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I honestly wish I could give you a big hug right now.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Some wounds go too deep. This appears to be one of them. I hope that somehow healing is possible.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so raw, and honest. Thank you for sharing this. Very well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Irishrite

6 Years Ago

Thank you Brittany. It was a tough one for me.
Brittany

6 Years Ago

I believe that, it seems deeply personal. And Authenticity is often the hardest thing to share.

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Added on April 9, 2018
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Irishrite
Irishrite

Pell City, AL



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Just a guy with a lot of messed up thoughts in his head trying to make sense of it all. more..

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