Mistake

So much I want to say

But I can't find the words

So I keep my feelings locked up

Don't want anyone to know

What I feel inside

So I run away and hide

Don't get too close

Cause I'll just push you away

Can't find the words to say

You're better off without me anyway

Sorry to say, I'm like a wrecking ball

I'll crash into your world

Bring you down, not build you up

Always thought I was tough

maybe I was mistaken

If you be with me

you'll only end up shaken

Believe me when I say

I'm the mistake you don't want to make

It's not worth the heart-ache

I try so hard, to keep you from getting hurt

But I'll only leave you in the dirt

I've never been good at love

So baby just walk away

I know you don't really want to stay

I'm the mistake, you don't want to make

Author's Note

Sorry if this sucks, but it started out I had posted a status saying 'So much I want to say but I can't find the right words' and that sentence alone struck inspiration in me and from than on I just wrote what came to mind. So this might not be my best poem. But I hope you enjoy

Reviews

[Stephen]

Uumm.. Not best?? Who said that? I`m gonna kill that personality who says, this write`s not a best!! *Wink* .. Wonderful job, i`m glad to read your stuffs again. I like how you define the moments of your life in words and now I can say, you`re much better at writing without my help ;) You`re amazing!!

I love these two lines much ...

"I'll crash into your world
Bring you down, not build you up"

Wonderful and very impacting lines. I love the raged passion of these lines. And moreover, you`re not a mistake but a faith who`s not in the world but living into the beats of all the tendered hearts. All verses`re great, written with proper functioning of rhymes. Your talent`s awesome and i`m sure, with the time, you and your talent`d shine up like a twinkling star across the whole world ~~ in all days and in all dark nights. Excellent job!!

[Jazz]

This is all coming from me, its just how I see myself. I don't think its a secret that I lack confidence.

Thanks!!

[Stephen]

Lol .. yeah, I find that and I know it very well WHY you`ve written this piece ~~~ thinking about whom in your beautiful creative mind .. lol Hope you forgive the world for the hurting your feelings!!

It`s my pleasure!!

[Jazz]

You know me I write what I feel

[Stephen]

Yeah, I know it which`s why I said, "HOPE YOU FORGIVE THE world for HURTING YOUR FEELINGS!! ;-)

[Jazz]

Yeah, I know

[Stephen]

Have a beautiful life!

[Jazz]

Thank you!