Until I Win This War

Until I Win This War

A Poem by Jazz
"

Stay strong, keep fighting, never back down

"
They say I'm wrong
I don't know a thing, about life
Or love, or anything
I'm just a child
I don't know a thing

They knock me down
Push me around
Keep me from finding
What life's all about

How will I know
Where I should go
If I never get to try
They tell me to give up
They say
Its not worth the fight

But I will keep fighting
Keep pushing through
Until I win this war

© 2014 Jazz


Author's Note

Jazz
Even if people tell you to give up or you have voices in your head telling you that you should just give up..Don't! Don't give up keep fighting, people are going to think you can't and tell you "you can't" but don't listen to them. Prove them wrong. It's honestly the best revenge. :)

"All these voices in my head tell me its better to give up on what I believe. But I won't give up on what I believe." -Rising Stars (Movie)

"Sometimes its raising your voice, sometimes its making some noise, sometimes its proving to the world..it was wrong." -Lemonade Mouth (Movie)

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~~ Sexy Inspiration ~~

I love how you blend your tender saliva of delicious lips with the inspirational words making them as hot as you ... very beautiful and much appreciative write. You`ve done a great job ..even this`s not only a piece but a great spirituality itself indeed. Very sexy message you conveyed to this horny world with your sweet sounding muse. it`s an excellent piece, honey.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jazz

10 Years Ago

More than words can describe :)
Stephen

10 Years Ago

Voo--Whoo .. so, if may I ask you to have some cuddles ..would ya give?? ;) Aye *Wink*
Jazz

10 Years Ago

Cuddles? Sure :) I love to cuddle



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Nice one !! The thought has been nicely expressed through words . Indeed if you have a motive so pure and you are so inclined towards achieving it, nothing can stop you :) My fav part was -
"They knock me down
Push me around
Keep me from finding
What life's all about"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jazz

10 Years Ago

Thank you!!
"But I will keep fighting
Keep pushing through
Until I win this war"
The above lines are words to live by. We can't give in or give up. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jazz

10 Years Ago

Your review is much appreciated.
~~ Sexy Inspiration ~~

I love how you blend your tender saliva of delicious lips with the inspirational words making them as hot as you ... very beautiful and much appreciative write. You`ve done a great job ..even this`s not only a piece but a great spirituality itself indeed. Very sexy message you conveyed to this horny world with your sweet sounding muse. it`s an excellent piece, honey.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jazz

10 Years Ago

More than words can describe :)
Stephen

10 Years Ago

Voo--Whoo .. so, if may I ask you to have some cuddles ..would ya give?? ;) Aye *Wink*
Jazz

10 Years Ago

Cuddles? Sure :) I love to cuddle
Nice message your poem gives to reader :) Yep! Never back down :) A nice read :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jazz

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
BlueDreams

10 Years Ago

My pleasure dear anytime :)

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