You make me feel Like I can fly When I really wanna cry Like I'm walking on air Cause I know that your there Your my best friend I never want this to end Boy that's how I feel And baby I know this is real When I met you I didn't know I'd feel the way I do I've been here through it all And I couldn't help but fall Side by side Or miles apart You still have my heart I see you standing there And baby its just not fair What you do to me And you can't even see I told you I'd never leave Now baby just believe I know that you and me Will aways be
Ah! What a lovely poem..and heyy, yeah ..you and me will always be ;) Thanks for penning this poem for me. I love this beautiful new poem .. and yeah, I got what you feel so, thanks for feeling me the way you love me and i'll keep you in my heart, Sweety... lol *Kidding*
this could be an awesome Beatles song, by Paul though. not John haha! great writing! :)
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Haha thanks, I actually originally wrote it as a song but I decided it works better as a poem. I can.. read moreHaha thanks, I actually originally wrote it as a song but I decided it works better as a poem. I can't write song haha
Ah! What a lovely poem..and heyy, yeah ..you and me will always be ;) Thanks for penning this poem for me. I love this beautiful new poem .. and yeah, I got what you feel so, thanks for feeling me the way you love me and i'll keep you in my heart, Sweety... lol *Kidding*
I'm Jazz, I'm 20, and I love writing, I mostly write stories and poems. I get new ideas for stories everyday, I swear that's all I think about are new story ideas. The characters in my stories have a .. more..