Changed

Before I met you, I had a different view on love

I never knew it could do more, than break hearts

I never had much luck with love, until I met you

You completely changed my point of view

You showed me all the things, I never knew

All the things love can do, I fell in love with you

And felt things, I never felt before

You changed my life, now when I close my eyes

All I see is you, everything else is in the rear-view

Now I can see you clearer, You changed me

Into the the person I want to be

You shine, like a star in the night sky

And baby, I never felt this high

Author's Note

New-ish Poem!! :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"You shine, like a star in the night sky
And baby, I never felt this high"
Real and true love make us content and know peace. I like the above lines. This is what love should be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jazz]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Stephen]

Whao...vooo-whooo...what a coolio poem i've read from you again. It's been so long I didn't read anything from you but am so glad to read this beautiful poem. It shows how passionate you are about your heart like making it heal when it gets hurt at all and that's what I like about you. Lovely poem. I like it now believe me, I can't wait anymore to read anything new from you :)

[Jazz]

I'll try to get something new up soon :) I have a few things I'm working on

[Stephen]

Very good, sounds very nice! ;) So, what are you working on now a days? Want to share something with me?

[Jazz]

I have some of my old attempts at songs and I'm trying to turn them into poems. I'm trying to figure out how to make them work as poems, the way I have them right now there really long. So I'm trying to figure out how to shorten them.

[Stephen]

Don't make them short ...let them stretch out .. heyy ..do you want my partnership again making a cool poem again like last time when we meet made a coolio poem?? ;P

[Jazz]

Okay in that case I will post them. Yes I would love your partnership again :)

[Stephen]

Cool..so, wanna show me something you pen on?

[Jazz]

Okay I haven't finish this yet but here's what I have so far
"You don't want my kiss
Baby its poisoness
Don't waste your love on me
Baby I'll only let you down"

[Stephen]

Cool ...whao..what a lovely poem..heyy by the way is this for me? Ah! Ok .yeah.yeah of course I want you kisses ..lol Hahahah *Kidding* .. and heyy..i'll show you my draft on this very soon make your poem an awesome one ever ;)

[Jazz]

Awesome :) I will keep working on it, and I can't wait to see your draft :)

[Stephen]

Lovely ..your the best ever ..so, would you come back again to this site tom?

[Jazz]

Yeah, of course I will

[Stephen]

So .. in what time?

[Jazz]

Whatever time you want

[Stephen]

OMG! Really?

[Jazz]

Yes, of course :)

[Stephen]

Uumm .. what about 8:00 p.m ..on a five star hotel in a candle light dinner?
Hahahahah *Kidding*

[Jazz]

Haha sounds good :)

[Stephen]

Haha..your very funny, Sweety ;) oh by the way, what about a long drive? ;P

[Jazz]

Haha, yeah I try to be I'm also very sarcastic and a bit of a smart a*s :p lol I like long drives ;p

[Stephen]

Smart A*s? Sounds very good..even it's good by me if your a smart a*s, it gives a good relief .. lol Ha! Oh whao .. you like long drives so, where'd you wanna go with me on a long drive?

[Jazz]

Anywhere I'm not picky, I do love beaches though. So maybe a long drive to a beach or something.

[Stephen]

Beach? Umm..well what if we stand hand in hand right in a lonely room looking out the window to shores and beaches in an evening time when the sunset tries to hide beyond the horizon?? I think, this'd be an awesome ..even more awesome than a long drive on beach cus, I love long drives not on beaches but on long straight smooth roads ;)

[Jazz]

That sounds amazing :)

[Stephen]

Cool ..Oh I neglect one more thing..and yeah ..we'd have some thrill either in nights..Hahahaha *Kidding*

[Jazz]

Haha, your funny :p

[Stephen]

So, won't ya love to sleep with me in a day sunny? lol

[Jazz]

Lol, of course

[Stephen]

Haha ..but please..don't make me much DEHYDRATED ..OK? Hahaha

[Jazz]

Haha okay, hey I have a question, I've been meaning to ask

[Stephen]

Okay .. ask me, you can ask me anything :)

[Jazz]

Did you send me a friend request? because the site says you did but I never got it

[Stephen]

No ..I haven't send you a F.R even I never send F.R to any writer, Sweety ;)

[Stephen]

No ..I haven't send you a F.R even I never send F.R to any writer, Sweety ;)

[Stephen]

I just thought that you'd ask that ..would I use Condom to have fun or not in a day sunny? But you asked a totally diff. question ..HAHAHAHA BUT I LIKE THAT! ;p

[Jazz]

Haha..wait what? Why would I ask that? :p

[Stephen]

Haha... Neah .. it's your right now to ask me anything sensible .. so, it's my priority to keep you safe ..after all..if I do something with you without condom then it could be very bad for both of us ..like your a very dangerous disease ..you can easily make us ill with HIV OR AIDS..hahahah

[Jazz]

Hahaha I don't believe I'm capable of such a thing :p

[Stephen]

Really? Thank God ..so, are you safe from HIV?

[Jazz]

Yes, I'm perfectly safe

[Stephen]

Thank God .. so, it means, we can have sex ..ain't we..lol ?

[Jazz]

Lol, whoa slow down, let's not get crazy :p

[Stephen]

Opps..sorry ;P

[Jazz]

Lol, its okay :P

[Stephen]

I think, I shouldn't make much conversations with you ..cus, may be much conversations with you freaks our my mind and I started making bad talks ... lol So, let's talk later on ;P

[Jazz]

Okay lol :p

[Stephen]

I think, today you again warmed up my body, may be, I gotta go right now to take a long crap cus, you getting in my head now and I should leave you before I make again any mess like last time that what I don't want ..lol Sorry, honey ..can we talk later on?

[Jazz]

Yes, of course we can

[Stephen]

Ah! so, C ya ..but hey..when you'll come back to this site like at what time?

[Jazz]

whatever time you want back, i'm pretty much always on

[Jazz]

*want me back

[Stephen]

OMG! You always turned on??? HAHA

[Stephen]

What????????///

[Jazz]

No, no thats not what I meant

[NoelHC]

This is well written, and does a fantastic job of showing how a person's heart can change by meeting and falling in love with the right person.

The lines

Now I can see you clearer, You changed me
In the the person I want to be

I believe you meant to write

Now I can see you clearer, You changed me
In to the person I want to be

Otherwise I like this a lot.

[Jazz]

Thank you. That means alot.

Oh thanks, I didn't realize I missed a word in those lines.

[NoelHC]

Ooops, my mistake, " Into" no space, well done though.

[Jazz]

Thank you.