I'm Tough

This is a very special poem, because I didn't write this on my own I wrote it with a special friend. ;)

Knock me down, I'll get back up
You think I'm weak, I'll show you I'm tough
Keep me in the dark, I'll find the light
Throw me out the door, i’ll be your dark-night

Push me down, don't pick me up
I can hold my own, don't believe in luck
Just knock me down, I’ll get back up
Never ever come if you think I suck

Life’s sweet baby like your tongue 
Don’t make it sour, don’t screw me up
My dream’s you, I never give up
I love you to the death, don’t ever break me up


Don’t break me up! 
Don’t ever break me up!

You can push me down, I’ll get back up
Pull me to your side, I’ll never ever hurt
Look at into my eyes baby, I wanna be your light
Throw me out the door & i’ll be your dark night

Let me hear ya!

Knock me down ..Just push me down
Hustle me down.. baby destroy me my town
Keep me in the dark, you’ll be my around
Don’t break my heart, My heart ain’t a verb but a soft noun

So, If you screw over me, i’ll get back up
If you think i’m weak, i’ll show you i’m tough

Author's Note

Me and my friend Stephen worked on this together :D (It was mostly him though)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"So, If you screw over me, i’ll get back up
If you think i’m weak, i’ll show you i’m tough"
I like the poem. Positive energy and a strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jazz]

Thank you for reading and reviewing. It really means a lot.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. It was my pleasure. You are a good writer.

[Stephen]

Awesome.. it's a great poem. I love this one. Ah! It didn't need to give me some credit ...but thanks for giving me some credit :) Your nice ;)

Hey .. go in manage writing and ....

Push me down, don't pick me up
I can hold my own, don't believe in luck
Just knock me down, I’ll get back up
Never ever come if you think I suck

Life’s sweet baby like your tongue
Don’t make it sour, don’t screw me up
My dream’s you, I never give up
I love you to the death, don’t ever break me up

...

Make a space b/w these two above stanzas..ok?

[Jazz]

Of course I had to give you credit I wouldn't have felt right not giving you the credit you deserve.
Okay I'll do that. :)

[Stephen]

Ah! What a lovely line you labeled me. Thanks allot. It shows that your not selfish and truly a very honey friend ...so, thanks for being amazing!

[Jazz]

Well your just as amazing so thank you! :)

[Stephen]

Thanks .. Your welcome! Hey ..you know what.. this poem you can save for long just to remind the day we made up with this poem ..and the first poem we've ever made together ..and if we meet someday in life then I hope you and me'd love to read this poem in future at the same time ..at the same place ;)

[Jazz]

Oh yeah I'm saving this poem. That sounds amazing :D