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Not sure where this came from, I just started writing and this is what I ended up with. I know it doesn't rhyme.

The whole world may be against you
But I'm still on your side
I loved you from the start
And I'll love you til the end
I promised you forever
And you taught me to never say never
To chase my dreams
Because nothing is out of reach
Anything is possible if you believe
You always picked me up
When I was down
Now the tables have turned
It's my turn to do the same

Reviews

[Stephen]

Voo-Whoooo .. Another new poem! Cool.
I enjoyed reading this one too. I was just waiting or wishing to read your new stuffs and see.. God heared my wishes and filled it and now i've read a new piece from you. Now what the thing I love about your stuffs's that you do write just from the depth of the heart, no matter what..which's why I love reading yur angelic words, you just pluck the words from the sky and shed them all with your smiles :)

O' by the way, here in this line .. "Not sure where this GAME from" ..I think, You wanted to say, "Not sure where this CAME from.." Hahah, isn't it??

[Jazz]

Thanks! :) I'm really glad you enjoy my poems, I might have another one up later today.

Haha well that's embarrassing, Lol yeah I mean to say came not game..I do that a lot. Thanks for pointing that out, I might have not noticed that if you hadn't said anything.

[Stephen]

Ah..My pleasure. Oh that's great, it means, am gonna grab an other one more opportunity to read your new poem. Whao! Voo-Whooo .. :P Lol .. c'mmon hit the world! O' sounds great .. well, am pleased to let ya know about it .. am glad you appreciate me :) Thanks .. your far kind.

[Jazz]

I really do appreciate you :) and always look forward your thoughts on my poems!

[Stephen]

Lovely, what a lovely words you've used on me, thanks .. You just make my time. Yes, of course, as always i'd always love leaving reviews on yer pages even i'd love to keep reviewing yer stuffs as long as am over this site or as long as you don't GET BOTHER by my reviews .. lol Hope my reviews don't make ya feel bother .. lol

[Jazz]

I LOVE your reviews, they actually completely brighten my day! I love reading your reviews, so feel free to keep leaving reviews. They always make me smile :) Lol your reviews could never bother me

[Stephen]

Ah! Thank God, you too brighten my all days and nights :) Thanks, You know what? I was worrying to review your writes because I was scared, may be you can feel bother by me cus, I again and again come over yer pages reading your beautiful stuffs and make you bother leaving many reviews at all but thankfully, am not happy to hear that you love my reviews, Thanks dear one. I don't know what other writers think of you but I'd want to say that Your awesome :)

[Jazz]

Your first person that's reviewed my stuff so I don't know what everybody else thinks. But I'm glad you think I'm awesome, cause I think your awesome :)

[Stephen]

Lol .. Okay ..well, I know, whenever the bunches of writers'd visit yer page then they'd too gushed that your awesome :) Oh whao.. thanks you the one, you making my time indeed. If you'd on front of my eyes, I'd have kiss your beautiful hands on the spot giving ya some pleasure and let you know how beautiful your hands are by whom you pen down the stuffs :)

[Jazz]

Lol, wow..okay then. :) If you say so

[Stephen]

Haha! Yup ;)

[Stephen]

Hey there, how's your day? I know i'd told ya that hit me with the words but ah! I hit ya first with the words ..Ha! Actually....may be, oday am not much free at the same time I was yesterday ..so, I logged in over the site cus, right now am free and just hit ya with the words ..hope I don't make ya bother hitting ya up with the words before the actual time of meeting..did I?

[Jazz]

No of course not. Its fine :)