ALONE

The feeling of being alone

ALONE

What went wrong, exactly?

Is this even real to be in such pain?

Where are they all?

Both lights and sounds are absent.

Darkness is all I can see and hear,

I feel a tear running down my face.

Who is at fault?

No one, since I alone am to blame for,

Unknowingly, I observe the sun,

as it rises and sets each day in order to comprehend.

I'm standing motionless and contemplating the meaning of life,

 when a mental fog begins to descend.

I lose all sense of time and reflect on my personal traumas.

What went wrong, exactly?

To be in such anguish… 

                                -IRIS MAY

Author's Note

This is my first time writing a poem, please show some love.
Please ignore my grammatical errors.
I hope you'll like my poem

Reviews

[willweb]

A very sad and lonely poem indeed, I can feel the depth of your emotions in this. Nice first poem

[Iris May]

Thankyou Sir, I really appreciate that you read my first poem!!