Bullies

Bullies

A Poem by Alm
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I hate bullies :<

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You may call them kings and queens

at the top of their game and feared by many

but they are the true cowards

they are not kings and queens,

they are beggars wanting attention.

© 2012 Alm


Author's Note

Alm
:( school makes me very sad sometimes.

P.S. I wrote this when I was angry. Very angry in fact, and this is one point of view to it, this is obviously not absolute. :)

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I kind of stand on the line of agreeing and disagreeing with your thought. Though I agree that bullies are beggars, I disagree that all want attention. You see, some beggars only want attention, but others only may want help badly. As many say but few understand, 'don't judge someone until you know their story,' which I mean do not judge someone until you understand why they act the way they do. Well spoken thought.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This makes me sad, as it was meant to. I really enjoy reading your work. You are so honest. I agree that bullies are in need of some form of attention whether it be needing help or just plain love. They may not know how to express themselves or are ashamed to ask for help. It seems there are bullies in so many places in our lives- school, work, etc, etc. The bully cannot stand on his/her own tow feet so must search out others to join in. Very sad and I feel somewhat sorry for them, but bullying must stop!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Alm

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Theresa for the review. It's very appreciated! :) Bullying must stop, I agree. It hurts s.. read more
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@Tai, I know that many times over. However, I guess this speaks only about some particular bullies. Everyone has a backstory to them. I should edit this and say "some" instead. Hmm. I know people aren't one-dimensional and unless there's some kind of thing gone wrong in their head, something must have happened to them before. :) Thank you for voicing your opinion :P This is mainly about the drama-llamas here who are picking on the innocent new students, so yeah, ahaha.

-Alm

Posted 12 Years Ago


I feel your emotion. Bullies are very mean. I wish I could protect them from you but I cant:( Very good poem however:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I kind of stand on the line of agreeing and disagreeing with your thought. Though I agree that bullies are beggars, I disagree that all want attention. You see, some beggars only want attention, but others only may want help badly. As many say but few understand, 'don't judge someone until you know their story,' which I mean do not judge someone until you understand why they act the way they do. Well spoken thought.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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. i agree with you ... i'm not in school any more ... but i encounter quite a few of them on this site and in my life ... no bullying can be justified ... and i don't think bullies should be treated gently ... they must be made aware of what they're doing so that they can stop being bullies ...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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