A note in a Bottle

This is a 50 words Flash Fiction Story.

Gabriel and Dorothy were taking a walk near by the beach after having a nice dinner at the local restaurant. All of sudden, Dorothy spotted a bottle on the beach sand with a note inside. She took the note out.

 

The note read, “You guys should get married right away”.

 

Reviews

[JE Falcon]

Dorothy felt sad because Gabriel was her cousin on a business trip from Atlanta, and he was already married. --- LOL
This was a fun and different kind of poem. But I wanted a punch, a twist, a smack me in the face ending. Still, I liked it!