Toddler's tool.

Toddler's tool.

A Poem by IreneMay Nya
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Honesty.

"
You know who you are, old friend.

You've told me your secrets, and i've told you mine.
But this last tale to you, will be the last time...

I see you every morning, and every afternoon.
Out of 3 years, i can't believe you've left so soon.

What happened?
What did I do?
Was it because i told you the truth?

I find it unfair, i find it cruel
that you tossed me aside like a toddlers tool.

I'm sorry i apparently hurt YOU in some sort of way, 
but todays the day, i'm walking the other way.

I told you a joke, but seriously you took it.
I'm sorry to say, your answer just blew it.

I know it is you, who should be mad at me, 
but i will NOT plead on my knees.

What i did was MY decision.
So don't add me to your 'stupid division'.
Good bye for now, i'll see you in heaven.

© 2012 IreneMay Nya


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IreneMay Nya
Unfortunate event of me loosing a friend.

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I like this alot. "I find it unfair, I find it cruel, that you tossed me aside like a toddlers tool" I like how you related an adult problem with a kids toy. It gives the poem contrast making the reader think about it for a while and leaving an image that sticks around, even once the reader is done. Thanks for sharing! :P :D
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Posted 9 Years Ago


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A very sad, but well written poem. The word choice was good and represently the upset feelings of losing a friend perfectly. Overall, it was very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I find this to be beautiful, and I love the way you put it into words. Grim but deep. Gorgeous words to mourn.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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IreneMay Nya
IreneMay Nya

Zombie Land, WA



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