Survive

Survive

A Poem by IonaFaith

Some days it's hard to breathe.
Some days it's hard to open my eyes. 
Some days it's hard to move. 
Some days are hard. 

Some days it's better to sleep. 
Some days it's better to have friends. 
Some days it's better to talk. 
Some days it's better. 

Some days it's easy to pretend.  
Some days it's easy to ignore it all. 
Some days it's easy to smile. 
Some days it's easy. 

Some days are hard. 
Some days are better. 
Some days are easy. 
All days I survive. 

© 2013 IonaFaith


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You have a good concept here, but I think in practice this is a little too repetitive. We get the gist of this after the first stanza, basically, and after that it gets old fast. I'd either leaven this out by only using your 'some days' tagline only in one or two stanzas and put in a few different ones to spice this up, or make this a lot shorter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


IonaFaith

11 Years Ago

The poem is about my mental health problems, particularly the repetitive nature of the thoughts I of.. read more

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IonaFaith
IonaFaith

Todmorden , Lancashire , United Kingdom



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I've not been writing long and nothing I write is ever planned, I write it as it comes to me. I mostly write poetry but occasionally write brief passages of prose, I have even been known to write lyri.. more..

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