El Amor

A little love poem in Spanish and English version

El amor
El amor es como una lluvia
Empieza lentamente poco a poco
Tocando la piel hasta en el alma
Atrapa mas y mas espacio con fuerza
Con violencia se siente hasta en los huesos
De muy suave a muy salvage inunda todo
Dejando su aroma a refrescar la mente y el cuerpo.

Love
Love is like a rain
Start slowly little by little
Touching the skin… infiltrates to the soul
Catching more and more space with force
With violence it is felt even in the bones
From very soft to very wild it floods everything
Leaving its aroma to refresh the mind and the body.

Reviews

[Aura]

Lovely comparison, love is like rain, I never thought of it that way. "From very soft to very wild it floods everything" love can be quite the flood, letting us sacrifice everything in the name of love. It can definitely get wild. I also like how you decide to write it first in Spanish then in English, El Amor sounds so elegant as a word and the title.

[Sami Khalil]

A double treat. Well done. It is all that indeed. Beautiful sentiments and right on.

[Ioana Mihai]

Thank you for the review, you too as always with the right words on you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome dear poet................