Buttercups and Daisies

The heart in love

You playfully
tease your hair
back over your ears
and smile that bubblegum smile,
your tongue
in the corner of your mouth
you're thinking...

a penny for them I say
you laugh
and turn away blushing.

I reach for you
but pause
taking time to take you in...

breathing you in
upon a floral scented breeze

your hair is buttercups and daisies
tied in poesies
with chocolate box ribbons

your summer dress is dreamtime
sewn anew
from bedroom curtains

your bare feet freedom and frivolity
nails painted green
poking fun at conformity

and you...

You are mine as much as a man can own the wind
or tame the wild mountain river

but you are mine
and I...

I am yours until such time as you no longer love me.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

A Grand poem indeed, InYourShadow...
beautiful, crisp-like imagery
that made sense from line to shining line...
I could truly relate and long to reach as well...
Great use of ellipses to emphasize pause and thought
Excellent write Iys
allen

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

that last line stole my heart.......I am yours until such time as you no longer love me. Something I say, I am yours and will be here until you tell me you no longer want me here. Then I will leave, but not until such time. Love this.

[E.V. Black]

Achingly sweet. So reminiscent of what spring truly is.

[EMF]

Ah, my calcified heart crumbles... just a little. Beautiful work, and handled with craftsmanlike perfection. You just made my day