Taste my Pain

Life and love is tricky

You said
you had to cut me..
just to taste of me my pain.

You said
you had to make me cry
just to drink in my tears.

You said
you had to hurt me so
just to be sure I loved you.

You said
you had to be certain
as you had been hurt before.

You said
can you forgive me this ache
but how can I



When all I do is ache

to be with you.

Reviews

[Laura Storm]

Very beautiful. I tend to lash out at those i love. Very good emotion in this peice. Keep on being amazing. :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

It's like reading a chapter from my life...you paint this picture well my friend. Excellent work!!

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thats full of yearning!! Almost makes your heart jump..not sure if this is healthy but it sure is exciting

[J Todd Underhill]

So well written this piece is that it makes me ache as well! Congrats on the placing in the weekly contest, well deserved too!

[Daytonight]

Ouch! This one made me hurt. Keep on penning.

[November Gold]

Wow. I have been on both sides of this, ironic really considering some things I am going through right now in my own life. Your emotion behind this was strong, and your words flowed perfectly to paint the picture as always :)

[SwEet PeA]

Lashing out to test love is so normal. I wonder if they ever let themselves feel it or if they settle into a fantasy. I feel how hard it is for you.