Playing Gentle On My Mind

Playing Gentle On My Mind

A Poem by Inyourshadow
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Love can never die

"

Your shirt still lays crumbled
at the foot of last nights bed,
and my ears are still ringing
from the words that went unsaid.

Thr scent of sweat still lingers
in the creases where you slept,
and the pillow stained forever
by the secret tears you wept.

You swore you'd never leave me
and as long as I draw breath,
your love will still surround me
till we are joined once more in death.

Your passing but a moment
between morning kiss and sweet goodnight,
so until again you hold me
I hold your image close and tight.

© 2011 Inyourshadow


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Wow...gripping, emotional, intense. A very very good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A haunting, emotional write. Love this! The rythym and words are placed perfectly. Beautifully done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a heartfelt poem and the tenderness felt is dear. I really like this. You may want to fix Thr to The though. Tiny typo. I have many so don't swweat it. It is a very nice poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very lovely and meaningful.. Most people write of the giddy thoughts and fluffy warmth of romance your different approach is very refreshing (:



Posted 12 Years Ago


this makes me think of late night trysts with a former love. One you still have feelings for but know they are only passing through. Wonderfully penned...

Posted 12 Years Ago


geeeeze... **sighs** that was on point with targeting sad emotion... awesome in that pen of yours!!
I love the last line... speaks so loud!
great work as always!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like Daytonights words...mournful melodies, indeed, not even death can end love...Sadfully wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


So poignant and tender. It plays across my heartstrings like a mournful melody. Keep on penning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The beauty of this is it's that it's just a beautifully simple piece of recognizable writing, but with a great meaning. As usual superb!

Posted 12 Years Ago


amazing piece... great emotion and just a great write

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Inyourshadow
Inyourshadow

United Kingdom



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I am trying to broaden my abilities as a writer, hoping to learn new styles and ways to express myself. I am married with 4 kids and a beautiful grandson, plus my two wonderful yorkshire terriers T.. more..

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