Picturing You My Love

Picturing You My Love

A Poem by Inyourshadow
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When all we have is a photo of our love

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Once more I lay alone
picking out your outline on faded paper,
picture unhung caresses my hand
as I take comfort from your memorised smile.

Once framed I now again frame soft your face
with finger tips aching your touch.

For if a picture says a thousand words
why cannot this one but say

I love you

one more time.

Time and distance fade as I now close my eyes
taking you once more
into my arms
and sweetest of dreams.

© 2011 Inyourshadow


Author's Note

Inyourshadow
Distance makes the heart grow fonder but how it also makes it ache

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I am a sucker for poems like this one. It made me heart ache a bit. :)

I felt the emotion seeping though the lines.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Distance is things nightmares are made of for it keep lovers so very far apart. Well done! Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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that it so touching..the pain is felt in each line..we treasure photos because of the emotional memory it triggers..lovely sentiment..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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such a sad write, but so well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A sad lonely poem.. longing for what was..

I found this stanza damn near perfect!!

"For if a picture says a thousand words
why cannot this one but say

I love you

one more time."

The pauses between lines.. gave it the drama to make it hurt..
INSTANT FAVORITE.. and 100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 3, 2011
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Inyourshadow
Inyourshadow

United Kingdom



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I am trying to broaden my abilities as a writer, hoping to learn new styles and ways to express myself. I am married with 4 kids and a beautiful grandson, plus my two wonderful yorkshire terriers T.. more..

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