Natural Beauty

Your beauty rivals nature

He bid the stars to softly fall
to add that twinkle in your eye
Then he stole the autumn russet
and the gold of morning sky

He told the summer flowers all
to add sweet fragrance to your hair
and the gentleness of petals
for you smiling lips so fair

He wove the wisp of dancing corn
giving your hips their graceful sway
and the tenderness of nature
borrowed from the deer at play

He left out the darkness and threw away the chaff
and marvelled at the beauty in your childlike laugh

Author's Note

Sugar and spice never spoke true of a woman for they never attained her beauty

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

I never really get tired of poems like this, the last line was especially sweet.

[Daytonight]

A more romantic or beautiful poem has never been penned regarding a woman's beauty. Well done. Keep up the amazing work!

[BriAnna Wyble]

this depicts such a beautiful picture. wow. i love how eloquently it flowed, well done!

[Ruth]

Amazing!
This made me smile, such beautiful depths..the imagery embracing only the loving and blissful light...
So beautiful hon!
xoxo