Amazing piece with some much truth in it. Some many people miss read our need and thoughts of self harm. I'm I'm tears thinking of what people do in their mind "to help" when honestly they know nothing unless they have went through it themselves. Great write and expression. Know forever I'm your friend. Keep writing.
i REALLY love this. is helpful criticism okay? cause i want this poem to be perfect since it's so powerful..
"why I do self harm": it sounds better without the do :)
and a few spelling errors..insecure*, "there there": the first one should be they're
People too often judge and the book always contains something unique and surprising within but just the cover gets noticed! Judgement is something that is too easily carried out!
Poignant poem love, like it a lot xoxo
you show your versitility with a subject that isn't covered enough or understood..and I do not stand here with understanding why people would release this way..but we are all individuals and I do not judge ..thanks for sharing a touching and insightful poem
This was painful to read, and it really pulled at my heart as I personally know how terrible it can be to go through such a thing as harming yourself. Sometimes a close friend that just wants to be there for you and listen can mean all the world and make much difference. Sometimes we need to be reaffirmed that there are those around us that love us dearly, even if we already know it.
I am trying to broaden my abilities as a writer, hoping to learn new styles and ways to express myself.
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