Count on Me

Just a contest entry for Darkling

One is for the darkness,
two many seem to find.
three from the bondage,
fore sought within my mind.
five is for the senses,
six with so much pain.
seven are the deadly sins,
that eight away the sane.
nine inch nails and bloodied palms,
bring one (1) to nought (0) as we self harm.
so banish light and draw the blinds,
for I am but the shadow of the self poisoned minds.

Reviews

[roy mccarthy]

great poem,
dark as hell!

[Daytonight]

Great write. Good luck in the contest. Keep on penning.

[nicolo]

Excellent. Hands down* I have a suggestion.. to make it more darker.. stop at 13. xP

Are you familiar with the song of thursday ... Jet Black New Year?

[Lily Mae]

Dark and intense.. I feel the raw nitty gritty... and love it..xx