Love swore

Love swore

A Poem by Inyourshadow
"

Just sometimes love is not enough

"

Swear you love me

soon became


Profanities hurled freely





© 2011 Inyourshadow


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Inyourshadow
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Ah the wonderments of a lust driven relationship....
Better duck, I see your lover's new shoe coming this way!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This really tugs at my heart strings. So much said in so few words. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Profanities? That is a way of showing deep feeling at times, though I don't throw them around lightly, sometimes they are needed to drive home a point, to make the depth of your feelings heard. I know it is hard sometime to have them thrown at you, but who knows what the real depth of the emotion that was running held?

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think i was in that same thought somewhere along the way...

Innocent I love you's
became strained obligations

Posted 13 Years Ago


Were there make up words?? It seems like these days the imbalance with "swear you love me" needs to be said quickly and then run lol...xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 16, 2011
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Inyourshadow
Inyourshadow

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