American Revolt

Time a certain man left the White House

Dogma of the oppressive state
gives us morality
steals our motality,
leaving us bleeding money
from a wounded economy.

Stealing working mens veiws
from skyscraper windows
as yes men forget the 4th amendment
once again.

The goverment men with throw away truths,
questions all
yet answer to none.

They gave us the right to bear arms
yet when we throw them in the air to vote
they move to ignore us,
price tagging freedom with promises
afforded to the rich
out of reach of the poor.

Time for change!

Time to breaks the chains

and once more

stake a claim to the land of the free.

Reviews

[alwaysthere]

I love it and it seemed true and honest I love the title American Revolt.

[Quiana Shakia]

I enjoyed this. This poem pretty much states what a lot of people feel, if not the entire country. Very nice. I always enjoy what you write. :)

[Skin]

steals our motality < < < < mortality, You probably have some egg on your keyboard. Time to breaks < < < break - the chains

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very powerful write. Excellent statements here.

[ImagineItAll]

This probably speaks to many people, but little have the confidence to express it. Very interesting and well done.

[Daytonight]

Very well written! Awesome job as usual!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Your point here is so true...

[stars are far]

this was nice
i loved your last four lines

[Raspberry Rebel]

A powerful write from you sweet...Everywhere's a mess, what will one man going achieve? Do any of them ever keep their promises...Thought provoking babes :x