Hunting Eleph~Ants ( revised for teens )

Lewis Carroll Hunting of the Snark

With hopefulness and promises,
with privilege and rights.
He chased the dreaded Eleph~Ants,
for forty days and nights.

With honor and with fortitude,
with conduct and with pride.
He pursued the dreaded Eleph~Ants,
leaving no place to hide.
 
With vigor and with virtue,
with respect, rage and rues.
He caught the dreaded eleph-ants,
and told them all you lose.

With stealth and with certainity
with cunning and with craft.
He had tagged the dreaded Eleph~Ants
" Now youre on " Jacob laughed.

Author's Note

A game of Tag between Jacob and the Eleph~Ants to celebrate his upcoming publication.

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Both versions are awesome! Keep up the great work!