Dis~figure knows your pain

Dis~figure knows your pain

A Poem by Inyourshadow
"

Love kills

"

                                  Blindly I believed
                        each time your lips lied on mine
                                  our love disfigured.


© 2011 Inyourshadow


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Inyourshadow
Just an haiku about the lies lovers lips speak

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Absolutely love this! Everything about it! The piece works really well as a whole...nicely turned into a piece where the reader can literally feel the demise....ohhhh....nice one! lol
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think we've all been there at some point, love is blind, not nessesarily love that kills, just the lies spilled, very sad haiku, hon. How did you get it centre~ish lol xxx

Posted 13 Years Ago


So very sad.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 2, 2011
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Inyourshadow
Inyourshadow

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I am trying to broaden my abilities as a writer, hoping to learn new styles and ways to express myself. I am married with 4 kids and a beautiful grandson, plus my two wonderful yorkshire terriers T.. more..

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